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Your Everything Disgusts Me (DC/SI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TotalAbsolutism, Jan 6, 2016.

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  1. Justlurking

    Justlurking Experienced.

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    "I hate not making sense."
    "It shall be done."
    Yeah, I can see that.:D
     
  2. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Bah, everything I say is perfectly in tune with a reality!

    And you can't prove otherwise so nyeh!
     
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  3. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Also Justice League: War was used for the original timeline of the JL's formation. So any foreknowledge the SI might have had is pretty well fucked. He can make some educated guesses and attempt to be prepared for things but the twisting of the timeline invalidates a lot of stuff.
    That's never really going to not be an issue. It's worth noting that in its home dimension the Puce ring operates one of the furthest slots from middle; which are generally the ones with strongest mental contamination. Specifically it's the equivalent of the colour that normally makes its users go literally insane with endless blind fury.
    Thank you kindly.
    It'd help a little bit. The Ring can't really defend against its own mental contamination though, as that's just a side effect of constant exposure to Puce light.

    Puce is objectively the worst colour.
     
  4. Hye

    Hye Reader of The Long Words

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    Alright, this popped up, but only because you quoted me

    And same with this

    This, however, didn't. Neither did anything, where i was not quoted, after it. So, yay, Vyor isn't special! He and-slash-or she is perfectly average!

    ...

    Wait, is that cause for celebration?
     
  5. Justlurking

    Justlurking Experienced.

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    I kinda picked up this was a pseudo-Red Ring.;)
    As far as modifying the concept to make a (mostly) heroic Red Lantern, I approve of the modifications. Better than GLTAS did it IMO.
    As our protagonist so often remarks.;)
     
  6. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    nah. i don't even mean the emotional part. i just mean how he seems to abide by basic debate etiquette, or at least the intent behind said etiquette, when interacting with people.

    it doesn't matter if the path you were on was the wrong one because trying to find the right one is itself the right path. or somehting like that. i hope someone who understands what i am trying to say can explane it better then i can.
     
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  7. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Well, there is a bit of nuance between Rage and Contempt.

    The former is violent, uncontrollable and rather immediate in how it manifests. Keeping Rage after the fact is hard.

    Contempt, meanwhile, lasts. It is the feeling that something has no value. An interesting part of the distinction is that you can feel Contempt for something that doesn't make you Angry, but the reverse is true far less often.
     
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    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    Rage is, categorically, what you feel outside of your reasoning while Contempt can only exist as a result of reasoning?
     
  9. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    LIES! I am special!


    (also, yes, he)
     
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  10. NakedFury

    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    lost interest the second you took your ring off.
     
  11. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    So the point of saying anything was...?
     
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  12. Justlurking

    Justlurking Experienced.

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    Shitposting, basically.
     
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  13. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Clearly. I must once more wonder at the type of intellect that thinks it's a good idea to offer such vapid and useless criticisms in a story wherein a major theme is self-loathing.
     
  14. Justlurking

    Justlurking Experienced.

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    What makes you think there's objective thinking going on there?;)
     
  15. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    this should help you figure it out. it's probably the S catagory that is causing it.
     
  16. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    I love this story. I hope that you continue it at some point.
     
  17. ultima333

    ultima333 Happy Sunflower Time Administrator

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    If you want to poke an author, you can do it by commenting on their profile or PMing them. But the thread's been inactive for over a month now. Please don't commit necromancy.
     
  18. tEN

    tEN Mischief Maker

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    You think that taking in the world by sensing rather than intuition is causing this? As opposed to, say, interacting with the world by judging it?
     
  19. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    Well they definitely weren't thinking about what they could say to make the situation better. That's rather why it was called "useless" criticism. Thinking about it, it's probably the same thing that caused you to not realise that "rather than" and "As opposed to" have the same literal meaning.
     
  20. tEN

    tEN Mischief Maker

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    They have similar definitions, and are frequently used together for stylistic reasons, much the same way that you would talk about, say, "Dave & Bob are doing X, and Jane & Emma are doing Y."

    N is the other thing somebody could have instead of S, making your assertion in essence "having S makes you more likely to do this than if you had N instead." Meanwhile, J/P is another category entirely, and the one that you should have been focusing on.

    You see, we have these things called words that are used to construct full sentences and ideas, and if you were capable or interested in having a discussion about it, you probably would have responded to the point that this is a question of how people are interacting with the world.
     
  21. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    In general, I don't mind any of my stories being posted in again after any length of time so long as its not just random shit.
     
  22. Hye

    Hye Reader of The Long Words

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    Well, that is very good to know. Now, if just the one who posted things were you, everything would be absolutely amazing :D
     
  23. Dark Abstraction

    Dark Abstraction Occasional Interloper

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    TotalAbsolutism, I notice that you've mentioned what the other lantern emotions from Puce's home universe are; I'm curious, will you be noting those via colored highlight in updates as you have for the native colors? Seems like something that the ring would do since it could detect local emotions, and it might be interesting to see.

    Could see Lantern Stewart noticing Puce's native emotional colors too, since he's currently the only lantern that's interacted with Puce and its presumed emotional spectrum database, though that'd of course be up to you.
     
  24. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Damn. :( I thought this was being continued.
     
  25. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    I update randomly.
    The reason it notes the local ones is because those are the ones with power. Its own spectrum doesn't exist; except for Contempt, which was dragged in and now has its own Central Power Battery.
     
  26. Felius

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    Brief thought on shields: While contempt for the attack mages sense, so might contempt for bei attacked or wounded, thus coming from the other end about what to feel contempt for. Or even contempt for being unprotected (which should be fairly easy to produce when you're about to be hour for massive damage otherwise :p )
     
  27. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    What? You're missing a few words.
     
  28. dasstan

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    "A brief thought on the subject of shields: While the conceptual use of weaponized contempt on the attack itself is feasible, perhaps a more generalized contempt for being attacked, or injured at all, mayhaps even extending that general contempt to being left vulnerable, could lead to curious and novel applications. The contempt for inefficiency potentially benefits the SI more than a point contempt-defense."
     
  29. Guile

    Guile Clothes That Kill Virgins

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    I don't think the protagonist here has the right mindset for that. Remember his contempt for himself was strong enough to remake himself from the ground up.

    Your idea would work better for a Gilgamesh type character. One with overwhelming pride in himself.
     
  30. Felius

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    Thank you, typing from mobile is a bitch.
     
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