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Your Everything Disgusts Me (DC/SI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TotalAbsolutism, Jan 6, 2016.

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  1. GiftofLove

    GiftofLove A Gift From The Heart

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    Aliens can't read your mind d if you're on fire!

    A nice present after working someone else's shift in another state.
     
  2. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    For your entertainment, the rest of the spectrum from the Puce ring's home.

    Puce - Contempt
    Gold - Glory
    Grey - Despair
    Green - Discontent
    Blue - Happiness
    Khaki - Mercy Pity
    Purple - Respect

    Found a better word.
     
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  3. Guile

    Guile Clothes That Kill Virgins

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    My favorite is Respect Power Rings. Have only Epic Rivalries with Worthy Adversaries!
     
  4. The Froggy Ninja

    The Froggy Ninja The Blade Will Never Die

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    Nice to see this update. I like where this is going.
     
  5. SpokenSoftly

    SpokenSoftly I'll be honest, I'm just here to read.

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    Purple: The Official Power Ring of Maito Gai! YOUTH!!!!!
     
  6. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    How is Mercy an emotion? I thought it was an action, or social construct, not something you felt.

    Can't even imagine how a Lantern powered by Mercy would work.
     
  7. TheOtherSandman

    TheOtherSandman Well worn.

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    Well, if Overwatch has taught me anything, it wouldn't.:p
     
  8. prandom

    prandom Definitely Trustworthy

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    The Happiness ring sounds kind of... frightening. Thinking about it, it means you would have to be happy any time you fought, any time you tried to do something with the ring. You'd have to be happy all the time. Even if you had to do something you hated, you would have to force yourself to feel happy about it.
     
  9. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Surprisingly well, in a terrible sort of way. As a noun it means, 'compassion or forgiveness shown towards someone whom it is within one's power to punish or harm'. Within that reality it was more or less analagous to Hope rings.
    It was hard to use to fight people, so it frequently wasn't. Though there were a few giggling psychopaths who found glee in the suffering of others, yes.
     
  10. TheOtherSandman

    TheOtherSandman Well worn.

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    I could see people who found joy in the rush of combat being Happy Corpsmen. Following the leader of their Corp, Captain Kenpachi.
     
  11. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    Napier would have been a prime candidate, then. Well, not any more, at least.
     
  12. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Would make them more likely to rebel. Anger gets lasers, righteousness gets strength, happiness for flight.

    Would need some damn good mental conditioning and brainwashing for them not to rebel in those conditions.

    I like your Cyborg.
     
  13. tEN

    tEN Mischief Maker

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    I can see tamaranians and similar using the happiness ring with THE GLORIOUS JOY OF BATTLE!
     
  14. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    No kidding, they'd be utter monsters to fight.
     
  15. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    not really. you would just need to deal with "righteousness", and let me tell you that is hard to feel untill you deside not to feel gult, and you would turn them all into glass cannons.
     
  16. Guile

    Guile Clothes That Kill Virgins

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    For humans, sure. For Tamaranians it sometimes seems their default state.
     
  17. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Ok, great.

    So, how are they going to induce these emotions? Kinda hard to feel happiness as a mindless drone. Anger they could do, but laser blasts aren't exactly the best weapon ever. Even starfire, an above average example of her species, has issues taking things down with them. So, in order to get any use out of them, you need for them to be not mindless, have the full range of emotions, and be strictly controlled.

    Good luck with that. Unless they have some form of emotion altering collars, which they don't, they can't really use them.
     
  18. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    G-Gnomes.
     
  19. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Aren't they strictly mind control and telepathy though?
     
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  20. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Probably not a far cry from those to emotion induction. Alternatively, put in specialised organs for inducing the correct emotions. Or, perhaps, do research into why those abilities are triggered by emotions and just cut out the middleman.
     
  21. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Fair enough, still a lot of work when there are other, better, options to go with for the same powers.
     
  22. Hye

    Hye Reader of The Long Words

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    Seriously! Vyor, what's so special about you? QQ keeps alerting me whenever you post in this thread, and no one else, other than Guile a single time
    [​IMG]
     
  23. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Thread knows vyor is my bro.
     
  24. wayne82444

    wayne82444 Experienced.

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    Did you check it after getting those alerts every time? In my experience the alert system alerts you to the first post made in the thread since you last viewed it, and nothing else (aside from OP alerts which are separate) until you view the thread again. That means it could just be a case of luck, and Vyor posted next after every time you checked the thread.
     
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  25. Hye

    Hye Reader of The Long Words

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    I checked it after the first time Vyor posted, but didn't check it until he posted a third time.
     
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  26. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    The server recognizes my sovereignty.

    Next: The world!

    Those are also options.
     
  27. Hye

    Hye Reader of The Long Words

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    Seems like we have one massive case of rejection of reality, followed by substitution of your own :p


    Or the thread is simply being weird. Get some more activity in here, and we can find out
     
  28. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    testing. testing. one two three?

    edit: if anyone can hear me from outside the thread please respond.
     
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  29. Justlurking

    Justlurking Experienced.

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    How about: I find this to be an interesting twist on the 'Young Justice Lantern SI' formula. Fusing Teen Titans and Young Justice is a pretty major shakeup I look forward to seeing where it goes. The mental contamination/positive feedback loop of contempt has initial elements of being different, but it's too soon to really stand apart IMO. TotalAbsolutism, you've done a good job making a character powered by what's basically hate into someone not completely flat. Huria puts good explanations to why he disagrees with people, and makes an effort to be, if not nice, fair to people. When he's an asshole, he suffers the consequences and recognizes his mistakes. He feels like just a normal Joe given crazy power, and has a genuine desire to do good.
     
  30. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    thinking about it i would bet that it is semi-caused by his contempt for irrationality.
     
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